[ Acc: 3 ] Guess What ?

Minggu, 04 November 2012

                
         Every day, Elaine is ridiculed by her friends. Because Elaine’s friends think that Elaine is very ugly and not knows style. Elaine feels that she is very angry with act her friends. Elaine is always be ridiculed, be shunned by friends. She not has a friend. Though, it only to together goes to cafeteria.

          At home, Elaine thinks that she has to change her style. Elaine looks for style that right for herself. Finally, she finds what a style that right for her. She is changing her style. After that, Elaine sees herself in glass. And she is surprise with herself and she not believes that she is herself.

        In the school, Elaine becomes very popular. Many friends want to be Elaine’s friends. Now, they are very kind with Elaine. Elaine feels that it is good for her. 

          “Elaine, let’s go to cafeteria!” said Elaine’s friends.

          “ OK! Wait me!” said Elaine.

       Whereas, before Elaine change her style. No one will not ask Elaine go to the cafeteria.

           Now, Elaine’s life like as shadow that very difference with Elaine self. Elaine feels that she in new world.

      One day, when there is a new student in Elaine’s school. Many people who discriminate her. Suddenly, Elaine knows that it like as herself ago. During Elaine at school she always cogitate of the new student it.

           At home, Elaine still cogitate what happen in the school at this morning. Elaine is conscious that the new student is she in ago. Now, Elaine thinks that she is not herself. Elaine thinks that her friends are only to lay her. Elaine believe that her new world not good. Elaine wants to be herself like as in the past. Elaine feels that he can’t life with her shadow.

          Next day, Elaine returns to her original style. And Elaine’s friends not believe about that do Elaine. They return ridiculed Elaine. Elaine feels that it is my life. Elaine believes that someday they can find friends who right. They can accept Elaine self though it is very dilapidated.   


          * So, Just be yourself !*


By : Reni Dwi Wahyuning Tyas ( XII Acceleration/ 14 )  

9 komentar:

  1. Meimei Sha mengatakan...:

    REFLECTION --> Christina Aguilera
    I really know the song.

  1. Meimei Sha mengatakan...:

    ren, I think your text should be past tense :)
    let's check it! thanks ^^

  1. Little Angel mengatakan...:

    Same with Meymey :p

    "Reflection" - christina A.

    but Reni, I agree with Meymey, there are still many mistakes, you should using past tense :)

  1. Unknown mengatakan...:

    I think it is true, the song inspires us to be ourselves do not be swayed by others.
    Come on, make yourself be yourself!!!
    So, Just be yourself !*

  1. ArchieFidia mengatakan...:

    Same with the others xD
    It's Reflection from Christina Aguilera.__
    .
    "Just be yourself" => I love that words :)
    Nice story~

  1. Unknown mengatakan...:

    I agree with others, use past tense ! :)
    This song same with Meymey's story : Reflection by Christina Aguilera.. :D

  1. Barly mengatakan...:

    I think the songs same with the other :D

    Reflection from Christina Aguilera ^_^

    After all that's good :)

  1. Unknown mengatakan...:

    hahaha, please use past tense in narrative text, okey.
    Christina Aguilera - Reflection

  1. Unknown mengatakan...:

    hmmm it has same theme with others student before right? but i appreciate for all of you because you write in another story, hope that you will be careful in choosing appropriate vocabulary, for example style that right will be better if it is changed into style that suitable, means that right is used to express something truth but suitable usually used to express appropriate of clothes or style

Posting Komentar