Rising Temperature in the Earth

Minggu, 12 Agustus 2012




Rising temperature in an earth is dangerous. It can make global warming, make ice in pole melt away, and skin cancer.

Firstly, it can make global warming. We can feel that condition in the earth very hot. Many people use umbrella when they go outside home, whereas it having glorious weather. 

Secondly, rising temperature in the earth can make ice in pole melt away. So, may be it can make small Islands sink. Because the sea level having increase.

Another reason is rising temperature in the earth can cause skin cancer. It can make   UV ray more much to shining the earth. If it will go on, it will upgrade a quantity of people who have skin cancer. Based on research that there are more than one million people who having skin cancer every year.

There are a number of reasons of rising temperature in earth id hazardous. They are make global warming, make ice in pole melt, and maybe it can make your body seized with pain especially at skin. So, we should keep the earth to reduce it. Example, we don’t burning rubbish, and we don’t cutting tree which never appropriate measure to be cut. 


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by : Reni Dwi Wahyuning Tyas ( 14 - XI  Acceleration ) 

6 komentar:

  1. Unknown mengatakan...:

    Rereeee..
    If the waste is burned, what other solutions ?

    :)

  1. Maybe we can chance it become fertilizer and we can bury it too. :)

  1. Rose Sunday mengatakan...:

    I like your hortatory exposition text,rere..
    because your writing is simple, scientific and impressive ;)

  1. Unknown mengatakan...:

    I liked your exposition text. because it was easy to understand ....

  1. Unknown mengatakan...:

    Thanks to post your hortatory exposition....
    I hope it will attract others to do the best...and don't forget to ask other to post their article as soon as possible.
    Have nice day...

  1. Afriska D. mengatakan...:

    This is very nice :) but can you give more examples to keep the earth from global warming, I think that it would be better ~~ xD

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